CE-2127: Revise texts

Revises some texts in CE D&M to be more idiomatic

src/views/records/RecordDetailsView.js

@@ -128,6 +128,8 @@ export function RecordDetailsView() {
         subset.Description = value;
       } else if (key.toLowerCase().includes("alias")) {
         subset["Record type"] = value;
+      } else if (key.toLowerCase() === "iocversion") {
+        subset["IOC Revision"] = value;
       } else if (key.toLowerCase() !== "iocid") {
         subset[key.replaceAll("_", " ")] = value;
       }